Monday, February 10, 2014

Outline/Thesis

*Thesis Statement* 
Finding this was tough because the essay is done and I couldn't pinpoint a true statement, but I love the way it's written, it tells my story.
--> "If you ask some people.. I’m sure they’d say this is when The Monster was formed."

*Outline* 

I. Inro
- Ask readers a coupe questions about life. 
- Answers questions your own answer

II. Second Intro
- Anecdote
- Introduce The Monster
- Who/What The Monster is

III. Body 
- Describe the struggle with the monster.
- Hatred to myself
- Fake persona in public

IV. Body 
- Suicide attempt
- Psych Ward
- Inner struggles 
- Kryptonite
- Therapy

V. Body
- More on The Monster
- Make the reader feel my pain after it described.
- Medication

VI. Conclusions
- Conclude the feelings
- Therapy elaborated
- How it makes sense
- How I overcame The monster
- Future endeavors (Irony in my future workplace)
 

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